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During editing, I found myself on chapter ten of The Fray.

It’s speaks on bravado, especially from one major antagonist, then switches to intimate moments with the two protagonists.

Miguel Cervantez reminds his wife, Nia, why he doesn’t mingle with humans…and the entire passage is everything. I laughed out loud, then of course, showed my significant other!

Fleshing characters out are important to me, as I am quite the character myself.

I didn’t recognize it during the moment I added a joke, or gave detail to emotions, I’m simply wrote and the expression is beautiful. In fact, that entire chapter was great! The context, dialogue and settings were almost unreal to me. I am very proud of this manuscript.

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Pretty soon, I will be switching to one major preview. After that, it will be final until the release of this incredible novel.

As previously mentioned, I have a second book planned – and I’ve already started writing parts of it! This has been quite the journey.